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Breathe Out Not In

this dark cloud looms in the air
we do not see its blind stare
yet we feel the fear it breathes
as we watch each breath we share

march 18, 2020

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John Watt

March 30, 2020 at 7:05 PM

Powerful, concise, and current. Best wishes in the contest (and in avoiding the dark cloud!) dear Sandra. Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

March 22, 2020 at 11:52 AM

A Powerful very clever write dear Sandy so well penned, is this Jueju! Blessings, Jennifer

Sandra Adams

March 24, 2020 at 8:35 AM

thank you so much Jennifer.... stay safe my friend... hugs and blessings

Caren Krutsinger

March 22, 2020 at 8:24 AM

Delicate and poignant my prophetic friend.

Sandra Adams

March 24, 2020 at 8:35 AM

thank you so much!' hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2020 at 2:31 PM

- A picture of how the world is today, Sandra ... all use plastic gloves and all smells liquor ... we can't share the same air ... or a kiss ... - You have to be especially careful, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

March 19, 2020 at 5:42 PM

I am trying... my son still works with public and he is sick but not sick enough to be tested...I am crazy with cleaning things and my hands are raw from all the cleaning and products I am using...I only go out to the store when I need to...I am pretty stocked for several days... things are harder to find now but some stores are opening the first hour of the day to seniors or people that are immunocompromised like me...so that will make me feel a little better... hugs