Breathe On Me, Breath of God

Each breathe we take nourishes our souls with life-giving, God-given spiritual nutrients. ~ Inhaling, we expand our opportunities to bless; Exhaling, we extend blessings to those around us ~ Breathing is much more than an organic process. It is the spirit of our Creator living and moving in us and through us to sustain our lives and make us a blessing of peace and goodwill to humankind. This is our God-given reason for being-- giving sustenance to our lives, and purpose to our interaction with others. “Breathe on me breath of God, fill me with life anew, That I might love what Thou dost love, And do what Thou wouldst do.”*
Entered "Repent and Believe" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh January 28, 2022 FIFTH PLACE WINNER Written August 11, 2021 (quotation from “Breathe on me Breath of God,” By Edwin Hatch and Robert Jackson) submitted to "As We Be Breathed" Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
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Agustin Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 1:40 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this God-exalting, faith-edifying muse, expressed in your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Beata, thank you for your thoughtful, sweet comment.
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Each breathe we take nourishes our souls with life-giving, God-given spiritual nutrients. Beautifully Written.
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thanks so much, Christuraj.
Rose  Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 10:01 AM
From your heart to God's ears my friend, congrats on your win Milton
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughtfulness, Vie. I really appreciated your comment.
Kauffman Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:43 AM
The living breath of life blows through your words Milt. Breathe on Me Breath of God is one of my all time favorite hymns! I love the concept of "extending blessings" as we breath out. This poem is as delicate as a breath. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Sam, thanks so much for your read and your thoughtful comment.
Seeker Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Wise words, we would all do well to heed, Milton! Congrats on your win!
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Wonderful writing. I love the quote too. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thank you so much, Gina. I'm so happy you liked my poem for Unseeking Seeker's contest.
Daniel Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 3:21 AM
Great take on the theme, Milton:) I love that old hymn:)
Hankins Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Jo. It has always been one of my favorites.
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