Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Breathe On Me

Breathe on me Spirit of Mother, Soul of father,  Karma of old 
turn my earthly body into a Celestial Dharma of reality 
Remove the chaos from my Universe and gather me 
beneath the Bodhi tree of love, where I can co-exist 
side by side with brothers and sisters of this earth. 
Breathe on me ancient one and invoke me 
permeate my chi like you do to Master of Grace 
Endow me with compassion empathy and mercy 
beneath God's golden sun, where we can pre-exist 
long before the big dormant sleep of death 
Breathe on me like you do to the dove of morning 
then raise me like the eagle in full flight 
Take away all obstacles in my way, and enter me 
like you enter the light of the stars at night 
long after the last embers of day have turned to cinder 
and the future of tomorrow, has had its cup of borrow. 

Love and light, Mystic Rose

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Silent One March 7, 2024 at 10:58 AM Hello my friend.. Your poem beautifully portrays the desire for spiritual elevation and transcendence, likening the process to the gentle breath of the ancient one, permeating the essence of the speaker like the chi of a Master of Grace. The imagery of the dove of morning and the eagle in full flight further emphasizes the longing for liberation and soaring above obstacles Mystic Rose Rose March 7, 2024 at 3:53 PM May we all soar towards the light, climb the highest mountain S, with God on our side, we can do just that. Thanks for reading and appreciating,

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 7, 2024 at 6:24 AM Dear Rose, This exquisite poem beautifully captures the essence of spirituality and longing for connection with the divine. Your words evoke a sense of reverence and desire for inner transformation. Your poem speaks with a pearl of timeless wisdom and a sense of peace. This touches the hearts of your readers. - Blessings, Daniel Mystic Rose Rose March 7, 2024 at 3:52 PM How dear it is when a poet recognizes the true meaning of a poem, thanks for the gift Daniel