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Breathe In

Open up Pour it all out, Breathe in Fill up with doubt, Watch them walk by, Trying to hold still, Upside down Sliding down this hill, Hit bottom Reach for your pains, Feel fear Every time it rains, See them melting, Holding on tightly, Crying slightly, Everything’s so frightening, Fall down Sink into waves, Desire it I’ve heard it saves, Crawl up the shore, Taste the salt on its lips, Hear it whisper in your ear, A beat from your heart as it flips, Close up Don’t let it out, Breathe in That’s what life’s about.

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Date: 2/26/2009 8:00:00 PM
When you're right you're right. Nice job!
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