Breathe, I tell her

Breathe, I tell her,  
When she cries to come out.  
Breathe, I tell her,  
When she trembles with doubt.  
Breathe, I tell her,  
When her heart starts to break.  
Breathe, I tell her,  
Instead of, That was your mistake. 

She hides in the silence,  
Afraid to be seen,  
Wearing her sorrow  
Like it’s routine.  
Her voice is a whisper,  
Too soft to defend—  
She carries beginnings  
That feel like the end.  

Breathe, I remind her,  
When the world gets too loud.  
Breathe, when she’s drowning  
In yesterday’s cloud.  
Breathe, not for them—  
But for her own flame,  
To stay alive  
When she’s tired of the game.  

I won’t scold the tears  
Running down her cheek.  
I won’t demand answers  
She’s too drained to speak.  
I’ll hold her in silence,  
No pressure, no show—  
Just soft little echoes  
Of Breathe, take it slow. 

She doesn’t need fixing,  
She needs to be free.  
To feel every wave  
As deep as the sea.  
She’s not broken—  
Just heavy with fight.  
And I’ll tell her to breathe  
Till she steps back into light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 3:15 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Nalana Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Thank you, Ma'am. I receive those blessings and send a tenfold to you. Be blessed
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