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Breathe

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Just breathe...

Breathe..! Gasping, into light you're thrown!
Like glass, your turning leaf is blown
clear of sweet slumber's song but there's
no need of hers - you'll sing your own.

You, newly born of mother's prayers,
will breathe your first of earthen airs
and thirsty, let your voice be heard
'til she's dispersed the drink she shares.

As leaves are, by the wind, bestirred,
with each new breath, you'll find you're spurred
on by survivals undertow,
as well as by debts love-incurred. 

Oh, precious child, I love you so!
What wonders of this world you'll know
but one day too, this life you'll leave...
Take one last breath and let it go.

Yes, breathe...

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Contest Judged 1/25/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcconnell Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:36 PM
This is so well penned Lycia, brings birth and death together so well and makes one ponder on the moment of birth and death. Excellent indeed!
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 8:32 PM
this is WONDERFUL
Callus Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Top marks to you Lycia! I love this unique take of yours on this collaboration project..one of the very best that I have read so far. ~ Hope the start to the new year has been a positive one for you:) ~ Regards // paul
Harding Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you so much Paul and the same to you, Dear Poe! xoxo
Bennett Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Lycia ; I like this write as the way it flows and the message it holds enclosed.
Harding Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Hahaha! EXCELLENT! Thank you, Donald. Funny man!
Bennett Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Yes Lycia is is attached and nice and clear. Appears to be a package nearly ready to be delivered. Nice.
Harding Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Thank you , Donald! But what I want to know is - can you see the picture I posted along with it?
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