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Breathe

Just hearing your breathe Knowing you will hear me if I speak Sitting in silence But even that comes from your heart And what is in your heart Is pure as a mountain stream Cascading over the rocks After a January snow The snow melts The stream flows The words flow As I melt into you Listening...to the sounds of you breathing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/1/2009 12:47:00 AM
Oh, this is beautiful. Love the emotion, structure, metaphor of the breathing and the mountain steam. Great poem. Randy
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