Breath Taking Love

BREATH taking LOVE 

in the mist of a refreshing summer morning
you take my night away, giving passion to exceed my day
a Romance so secure, a kiss before you walk away
Cherishing you with one thought through out the day
I await for your return, with the sight, holding my breath
two spells bestowed on me and you
a song meant for two, dance under the twilight
strike a match burn my fire, my one true desire

beauty comes in divine
lost in the art our bodies show
an over heated lamp, no reason to dim the light
Passion so deep, nothing else compares
temptation devoting measures, intoxication full of exotic pleasures
worshiping the ground, a walk so unique
tongue twisted, a rich flavor of mine 

Lusting you beyond hot,
like a sparkling gem, a bag of rubies is what you got
Holding me mesmerize with your eye
making my cold days warm with out a blanket
the sun gets brighter, only you can fix my broken smile
a steal with your appeal 
luxury worth more than gold
arms so tender I welcome your hold
contamination of the heart, a smell of flowers 
perfect under the moonlight
timeless flipping the hourglass around
Destine  to be the one my journey takes
my fate, your hands, my love, you make,
our lives  worth living for

I look in to the sky As two eagles soar,
 symbolizing our love A love that is forever, immortal
 for eternity, a love so endlessly..

           for:   the Rambling Poet   ////  (contest)
                   = BREATH TAKING LOVE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jones Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Linda, this is so beautifully penned. Truly enjoyed. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Dunn Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 6:57 PM
A passionate write here full of beauty and grace, young love it's a beautiful thing and has wonderment in it's expression great work my friend enjoy. cheri
Davis Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:12 PM
This is a passionate and endearing write. Full of love and emotion that pulls the reader in and takes them on a journey of romance and sentiment. Nice job Hugs
Gasun Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Good morning here/good night there my dearest sis! This is a super lovely, super sweet and super romantic poem of yours which I love so much and has enjoyed reading while taking my breakfast! I saw it's one of your winning masterpieces! Belated huge congratulations on your fantastic win on this gem my dearest sis! Thank you so much for sharing! Soupmail for you! I'll be coming back! love and biggest sweet hugs, Leonora
Scott Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 12:39 PM
YOU WRITE WITH SUCH PASSION YOU HAVE A LOT OF LOVCE IN YOUR HEART HOPE I MEET SOMEONE LIKE YOU ONE DAY LOVE YOUR EXPRESSION XXX DAVIDSCOTT
Ivy D Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Congrats! PeDee breathtaking & beautiful' sandy
Long Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations on your well-written Beautiful Love Poem. I enjoyed reading every verse in it, and it really did captivate me. Love it!! Good write You made the characters come alive, and it was mesmerizing.
B Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 9:20 AM
P.D. this had great word choice to catch the emotion and feeling of a "breath taking love". Congratulations on being featured!
Neels Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Really enjoyed this Linda :) congrats on it being featured!!
Austin Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Shazaaaaammmm! Passionate stuff, oh Destroyer. Enjoyed mucho and now must still the thump of my pacemaker. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Cornwall Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 8:10 AM
lovely poem.. and congrats...patrick
Horsman Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 5:43 AM
wow 2 years ago, still this poem is like a breath of fresh air to me. love this. harry
Beesley Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 8:54 AM
a beautiful beast
Kasonga Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:04 AM
AMAZING!
Vallone Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 8:55 AM
I love the passion, you have a great talent. I see that you won an award. I am not shocked at all! great job! ~The Lovely Nightmare
Hales Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 11:20 PM
Really nice enjoyed this very passionate ... sarah x
Neels Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:18 AM
After reading this I completely understand why you won the contest.. ~ WN
Lekkas Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 5:33 AM
i love this :)
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" PD. Love, Carol
Dillard Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 8:04 PM
Hey PD! So good to see you in the top! RAY
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 5:27 PM
SUPER SOUPER CONGRATS to P.D. my BBF for your winning poem in the B.L. contest.. with these lovely lines so very expressive .. another great win for u to enjoy ..your BBF "Sweetheart"
Hollins Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:05 PM
great write, well said!!!!!!!
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:32 PM
PD you are now officially on my favorite Poet list. Thank you so much for your always kind comments. Love, Carol
Trevino Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 11:09 PM
beautifully said:)
Bateman Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 2:14 PM
can you send me a soup mail message please, i need to talk to you in private.
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