Breath of Moon

BREATH OF MOON
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        ~ chain-link breath of moon

                       smearing  gray winter-kissed chill  ~~

                              a night owl tiptoes ~
                      
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for Constance's Haiku Me Some Nature, Please
by nette onclaud
2 sept 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Stopping by your amazing poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine . Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Jones Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:52 PM
i tiptoed through the tulips in the San Jose airport once with something of a night-owl whose name was Tiny Tim.. was a high point! .. it's up ms. netteski.. soupy mail has details. namaste ~N
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September 5, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 8:23 PM
a very unique one it is. Congrats, Nette.
Merryman Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Congrats, Nette! Kim
Susan Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:26 PM
congratulations on your win! tiptoes - i like it!
Fraser Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Oh how I would love to see an Owl tiptoe in the light of the moon. They are beautiful birds. Many congratulations Princess on your win. Have a lovely Sunday :) & hugs 4 u
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Many more congrats, Nette : )
Mehta Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,nette
Williams Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 5:06 AM
hey Nette congrats on this very impressive piece, i would give anything to see an Owl tip-toe, ha ha ..David
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September 3, 2011 at 11:25 PM
Congrats Nette luv on 7th place win with this stunning poetry entry ..superbly penned luv..
Song Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Nette, You were writing of an owl you saw near your home in this piece? If so, u made the ordinary, extraordinary! Awesome! Gwendolen
Sumler Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Another beauty from your bulb of thoughts Nette! You've fashioned well the imagery and nature in this gifted haiku!
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September 3, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Sooo Much More Unto This Intriguings Verse Than Would Meet Ones Naked Eye My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Nette! *^_^* I Read Its Profound I Would Say, Thrice Times, & Could Read Its Splendours Fifty-five Times More *^_#* Yet Still, Only Your Gifted Beauty Would Truly Know All That Its Colours Speak & Speaking of Such, Twas Nice As Always to Hear From Your Lovely Hues, My Dear &, Sweeet Poe!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Ever & Ever & Evermore, Jasper *
Horne Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:51 AM
love the visuals this one conjures up, Nette
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Good luck in Constance's contest with this wonderful work..Reads like a winner to me..Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Towards a frog...I think...haha...j/k.I sometimes wonder how you choose the wonderful words..When you say 'chain-link breath'perhaps you are first to use chain-link as an adjective to 'brea th'Another excellent write Nette,Best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 9:56 PM
very beautiful one,Nette. I never thought of an owl tiptoeing!!
Jones Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 8:45 PM
got latest? is all cheery and such... yo, mama
Sivey Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 8:37 PM
A great and incredible write! Love the descriptions...as usual, the best! Good luck in the contest...it will do well I know!!
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September 2, 2011 at 8:09 PM
wow~~~another fantastic write~~~hmmmmm...i can feel every line my friend~~~LOL~~~and two thumbs up about your comment in frank herrera's blog.....about the former president~~~hahahaha*-* jun-jun ~*~
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