Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Breath of Love

In autumn’s wind, I look up to the sky.
How sweet the breath of love upon my face!
In rustling leaves, I hear you softly sigh;
in autumns wind, I look up to the sky
and see what time and death cannot erase. . . 
In guise of sun’s bright rays, you are nearby!
In autumn’s wind, I look up to the sky.
How sweet the breath of love upon my face!


Written 2/7/2015 for the Contest of Gail Angel Doyle

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Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 9:42 PM Just gorgeous, Andrea, and a form I have not tried as yet ... I adore the flow, and your imagery is exceptional! Congrats, Dear Friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 7:30 PM What a beautifully enchanting poem, Andrea. Had to FAVE it !

Sandra Haight February 3, 2018 at 7:04 PM A very lovely, beautifully written Triolet, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 3, 2018 at 7:09 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea! I don't think I have seen this form before, certainly not as excellently executed as this. :) xomo!

CayCay Godwin February 2, 2018 at 9:10 PM I came just to congratulate you for placing so high in this PARTicular contest, but ended up falling in love with your beautiful poem, it is simply gorgeous and more. WOW on 2 counts from me. I would fav it if I didn't have a thing about then having to keep care of my favs (print them out? put them on a disc? memorizing them is out of the question) Love ... CayCay

Agnes Krampe February 2, 2018 at 8:04 PM Congrats on your win, Andrea. I don't think I have seen this one before - glad to see this surface in the contest.

Dale Gregory Cozart February 2, 2018 at 6:21 PM Congrats on your win, Andrea. I need to try harder on my triolet's.

Mick Talbot February 2, 2018 at 6:18 PM You cracked it Andrea, a wonderful triolet, congratulations on a well worthy win! :-) Mick

Phyllis Babcock April 21, 2015 at 6:47 PM A form I have not tried and you did an awesome write with this one. Love it. love phyl

Julia Ward March 1, 2015 at 3:56 AM I love composing triolets, although I have yet to send one to Soup. I liked yours very much, Andrea ! Best wishes, Julia

Angie Thomas February 16, 2015 at 6:31 AM I've not come across this form before Andrea and I quite like this poem. I wish you best of luck :)

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2015 at 6:11 AM Creative use of the form..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Great to speak of love..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Matthew Anish February 10, 2015 at 3:04 PM Liked the last line especially. Back to ESL for me - talking with immigrants is interesting - you get a lot of stories. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Joe Maverick February 10, 2015 at 2:50 AM Enjoyed the windy, breathy face of this piece Andrea, I wonder if the sky was looking back at you..? hope things are good there..'

Daver Austin February 9, 2015 at 11:34 AM Very tender and wonderful. Love, daver

Monterey Sirak February 9, 2015 at 8:21 AM Your words softly sigh with a gentle love. Fabulous poem for the contest!

Red Omara February 8, 2015 at 11:05 PM This is such a gentle and lovely poem that I almost didn't notice who it was that you were speaking to. And so it moved me as much as your best often does.

David Meade February 8, 2015 at 9:55 PM This is a fav for me . . . the autumn wind is a might friend and to see the love you expressed was pure joy for me. 7

Arthur Vaso February 8, 2015 at 6:58 PM Very majestic and romantic! Loved it!

Jennifer Walker February 8, 2015 at 6:22 PM Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2015 at 6:11 PM This is wonderful Andrea! The spirit of a love never dies. GL in the contest Andrea.

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 4:03 PM So beautifully penned Andrea I like the triolet form for this poem - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

John Fleming February 8, 2015 at 3:20 PM Yes...it is rather beautiful! :) john.

Sandip Goswami February 8, 2015 at 2:53 PM Simply beautiful. I wish your best position.

Constance La France February 8, 2015 at 2:00 PM Andrea, this is brilliant and lovely for the contest, best of luck and thanks always for supporting my poetry ~~

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