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Breath of Love

In autumn’s wind, I look up to the sky. How sweet the breath of love upon my face! In rustling leaves, I hear you softly sigh; in autumns wind, I look up to the sky and see what time and death cannot erase. . . In guise of sun’s bright rays, you are nearby! In autumn’s wind, I look up to the sky. How sweet the breath of love upon my face! Written 2/7/2015 for the Contest of Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 2/15/2018 9:42:00 PM
Just gorgeous, Andrea, and a form I have not tried as yet ... I adore the flow, and your imagery is exceptional! Congrats, Dear Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:30:00 PM
What a beautifully enchanting poem, Andrea. Had to FAVE it !
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Date: 2/4/2018 3:29:00 AM
By the way, you inspired me to write my own triolet so thank you x
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Date: 2/3/2018 7:04:00 PM
A very lovely, beautifully written Triolet, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2018 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! I don't think I have seen this form before, certainly not as excellently executed as this. :) xomo!
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Date: 2/3/2018 6:33:00 AM
This is lovely Andrea. I hadn’t come across this form before but you use it beautifully.
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:10:00 PM
I came just to congratulate you for placing so high in this PARTicular contest, but ended up falling in love with your beautiful poem, it is simply gorgeous and more. WOW on 2 counts from me. I would fav it if I didn't have a thing about then having to keep care of my favs (print them out? put them on a disc? memorizing them is out of the question) Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I don't think I have seen this one before - glad to see this surface in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2018 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I need to try harder on my triolet's.
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Date: 2/2/2018 6:18:00 PM
You cracked it Andrea, a wonderful triolet, congratulations on a well worthy win! :-) Mick
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Date: 4/21/2015 6:47:00 PM
A form I have not tried and you did an awesome write with this one. Love it. love phyl
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:56:00 AM
I love composing triolets, although I have yet to send one to Soup. I liked yours very much, Andrea ! Best wishes, Julia
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:31:00 AM
I've not come across this form before Andrea and I quite like this poem. I wish you best of luck :)
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Date: 2/11/2015 6:11:00 AM
Creative use of the form..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Great to speak of love..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2015 3:04:00 PM
Liked the last line especially. Back to ESL for me - talking with immigrants is interesting - you get a lot of stories. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:50:00 AM
Enjoyed the windy, breathy face of this piece Andrea, I wonder if the sky was looking back at you..? hope things are good there..'
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Date: 2/9/2015 11:34:00 AM
Very tender and wonderful. Love, daver
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Date: 2/9/2015 8:21:00 AM
Your words softly sigh with a gentle love. Fabulous poem for the contest!
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Date: 2/8/2015 11:05:00 PM
This is such a gentle and lovely poem that I almost didn't notice who it was that you were speaking to. And so it moved me as much as your best often does.
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:55:00 PM
This is a fav for me . . . the autumn wind is a might friend and to see the love you expressed was pure joy for me. 7
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:58:00 PM
Very majestic and romantic! Loved it!
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:22:00 PM
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:11:00 PM
This is wonderful Andrea! The spirit of a love never dies. GL in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 2/8/2015 4:03:00 PM
So beautifully penned Andrea I like the triolet form for this poem - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:56:00 PM
A creative eye.. an artist pen.. A beautiful mind.. Your nature's friend!
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