James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Breath of Love

Sometimes in life it never goes as planned
Into cul de sacs we turn behind us we leave
Feelings and sadness dealt by life's demands
Find that shining light, deliver us from reave

To me that light appeared, not one but two
Father God through his book, I entered 
Pasts burdens left behind, no longer askew
My path of life now clearer, happily centered

Forward I now look to share this romantic day
Valentines as we know it, where hearts decide
For they shall speak volumes in loving display
Under Father God, for it's with his hand we guide

This day has finally arrived, it's the morn, we
Awakening with a kiss, cuddling, warming hearts
Smiles abound aplenty, amidst silken sheets glee
To forget pasts grief, welcoming our new start

Holding hands in prayer we, to our Father God
Us on this romantic day, blessed to each other
To thank him, we grace, righteously we laud
Breath of love now lives, no longer in smother




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Robert Lindley February 9, 2015 at 9:30 AM You have done it again my friend. A gem this write is, the message, the rhythm and rhyme flow like a bubbling , clear mountain stream! A super 7 on this one and I am adding this spiritual poem to my fav list!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 5:04 AM :) the first line is captivating so sure you can keep the reader going.... i like how you place Father God in this breath of love poem.. :)! Isn't HE the best author of love stories? Hope He will soon write mine.. :)! sweet, inspiring and humbling write.. --olive eloisa.. :)! James Fraser February 7, 2015 at 1:44 PM Thank you Olive for your kind words. Indeed Father God is the best author of love stories, written through us. Sometimes when we write, it makes ones hairs stand on end. This is one write, amongst others I've written that has made this happen. Somethings happening in my life that's true and right, hugs, James xx

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2015 at 5:09 PM Good one for the contest..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Valentine's is just around the corner..Sara James Fraser February 7, 2015 at 1:11 PM Hiya Sara, indeed Valentine's Day is just around the corner. I love it when you grace my pages, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison February 5, 2015 at 4:56 PM Deep romantic spiritual imagery James - great pen ooh and awakening with a kiss and a cuddle and warming hearts - not just for Valentines Day lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 3:52 PM I hope it does well for you too - thought of you yesterday - went to see school production of Sunshine on Leith - am working on a poem about it:-) amazing the talent we have on our little Island:-) hugs jan xx James Fraser February 6, 2015 at 3:46 PM Thank you Jan, I hope it does well as I rather like this poem. Have a wonderful weekend, hugs, James xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter February 5, 2015 at 4:40 PM Very nice pen James! I truly enjoyed your very romantic and spiritual piece, my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love n hugs! xxx D. James Fraser February 6, 2015 at 3:39 PM Thank you Dorian, wishing you a happy weekend, hugs, James xx