Breath of Love

You came into my life one cold March day
My life changed completely in every way
Mesmerised by your beautiful blue eyes
We were inseparable and time just flies
Having travelled together near and far
Singing top chart songs in my Vauxhall car
Plenty of loving cuddles we have shared
Laughs and silly pranks, so perfectly paired
Each meal I made was a special delight
Watching TV on a takeaway night
Then time came when we had to separate
How hard that was, though I knew it was fate
Though we have accepted how life can change
Different pursuits, a wide varied range
I never forget, especially birthdays
For you changed my life in so many ways
From first time I beheld your perfect frame
Held you close and chose your Christian name
My darling son I felt first breath of love
Life given to you from Heaven above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Adams Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Amazing poem, Theresa, easy flow and great rhyme, with a surprise ending. Great job!
Stephens Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thank you for reading and your very kind comments xx
Fisher Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:48 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Theresa. I didn't see that ending coming.
Stephens Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:51 PM
I appreciate your reading and thank you for your kind words of support xx
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