Mark J. Halliday Poet I do not know?

Breath of Love

Inhale deeply my breath of love.
Hold it; try not to let it go.
Let it course through you like soul-fire.
Let it enflame you like desire.
Let it enfold you like a glove.

Exhale, and breathe me in again.
Hold me; try not to let me go.
Pull me closer, still closer in;
Until you feel me ‘neath your skin.
Inhale my breath of love again.


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Emile Pinet February 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM This poem comes alive and touches your heart with strong emotions so well imposed with superb imagery. You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. Very well written. Emile. Mark J. Halliday July 1, 2016 at 1:27 AM Belated thanks for the positive comment. Has too many cliches in it though,

Crystal Keehn February 3, 2015 at 8:18 PM It's so fantastically intimate. Mark J. Halliday July 1, 2016 at 1:28 AM Belated thanks for the positive comment. It's full of cliches though.

Frederic Parker February 3, 2015 at 6:07 PM this should do well in the contest ..good luck Mark J. Halliday July 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM Belated thanks for the positive comment.

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:05 PM wonderful passionate imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Mark J. Halliday July 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM Belated thanks for the positive comment.