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Breath of Love

Inhale deeply my breath of love. Hold it; try not to let it go. Let it course through you like soul-fire. Let it enflame you like desire. Let it enfold you like a glove. Exhale, and breathe me in again. Hold me; try not to let me go. Pull me closer, still closer in; Until you feel me ‘neath your skin. Inhale my breath of love again. 20150203

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2015 8:22:00 PM
This poem comes alive and touches your heart with strong emotions so well imposed with superb imagery. You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. Very well written. Emile.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2016 1:27:00 AM
Belated thanks for the positive comment. Has too many cliches in it though,
Date: 2/3/2015 8:18:00 PM
It's so fantastically intimate.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2016 1:28:00 AM
Belated thanks for the positive comment. It's full of cliches though.
Date: 2/3/2015 6:07:00 PM
this should do well in the contest ..good luck
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2016 1:29:00 AM
Belated thanks for the positive comment.
Date: 2/3/2015 6:05:00 PM
wonderful passionate imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2016 1:29:00 AM
Belated thanks for the positive comment.

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