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Breath of Fresh Air

Breath of Fresh Air She is a breath of fresh air The kind you don’t meet every day Her long and graceful fingers are filled with (bling) From the men who loved her before. She is the kind that makes you blush with a glance. Her beauty surpasses that of an intricate sunrise. She speaks the truth and does not (blabber) About unimportant and mundane things She drinks of life and (slurps) as she swallows from its cup! Unadulterated laughter fills the room when she muses. A (drizzle) of joy fills all the dark places and dispels all fears Like a gradual but steady waterfall, It (sloshes) into the next week. Once you have met her… You will never be the same. She is a woman who can make you feel A million emotions by one encounter She will steal your heart And put it in her pocket In case she may need it one day! So, breathe her in and never forget her face. Written November 9, 2021 For Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet (ps. underlining and bold did not paste when formatting to poetry soup so words used are in brackets) sincere apologies

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