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Breath of a Different Weather

To Never Breathe Again 


No  breeze in the night-time
The winter weather goes
The heat runs out of sunshine
nobody knows
Summer refuses
Spring is passing a different change
The last fresh air we use
The world's gone strange
The weather's confused
No autumn leaves to rearrange
No whispers in the wind
The air is dry
No pouring in the rain
The storm does not cry
No loudness in thunder
The lightning no longer strikes high
No one then wonders
The answer is why?
The water is not splashing
No clouds in the sky
The weather's not passing
Can the weather just die?
         
  Skat POETRY

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Christopher Nilo November 16, 2015 at 3:16 AM *speechless* i am...each and every line...I would quote you however I would just end up copying it...truly thank you so much for creating this beautiful blunt truth in the subtlest way...may your pen be blessed and you as well...*bows*...and just so you know???...this is a beautiful tribute to us and my wife...our mother...humanity...stay safe and stay blessed...-christopher

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 6:51 PM i did work on this poem.

Michael Miers May 17, 2015 at 8:09 PM well, this one kind of creeps into one's melon. pretty cool.

Robin Davis June 18, 2014 at 11:01 PM SKAT This is an interesting and creative write that has a very powerful and deep question at the end which is a brain teaser. Thank you for the great comment on my If I Were A Man poem.

Wendy Meyer November 3, 2013 at 12:51 PM Linda, Congratulations with this one and to others as well that you have written and shared.. for a second i thought i wanted to cry like a baby with this one,,but i hastily caught myself and thought again, "good heavens! a bad weather is needed to appreciate the good one." :-) thanks for being an inspiration here to many of us...i remain a friend, wendy Wendy Meyer November 3, 2013 at 12:55 PM please forgive me, it should be SKAT not Linda...my brain is mixed up at this unholy hour...

Poet Destroyer A November 2, 2013 at 11:53 PM awesome....:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

Juliet Ligon October 27, 2013 at 6:02 PM Interesting thought. I'm thankful the weather is always changing, making each day's atmosphere unique. You give readers a picture of what it'd be like without. Awesome, you made the front page news! : )

Fatima Nusairat October 27, 2013 at 3:48 PM So happy to read your poem among featured poem,Skat! but you Know I can't find mine can you show how I can see it..love fatima <3

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 12:12 AM yes! :-)

Gert W. Knop May 31, 2010 at 8:45 AM Would be a unbearable world without weather, but at the moment it looks more like autumn than beginning of summer!!1 Nicely written Poem, SKAT! And thanks for you commenting "The Cat at the Window"....Gert

Debbie Guzzi March 27, 2010 at 11:10 AM the earth mother breathes we have weather! Light & Love

Sue Mason March 21, 2010 at 7:17 PM Hmmm ... interesting question here at the end of this very melodic write!! There are a number of words I could play school teacher with and correct the spelling but I really enjoy your "voice" just the way it is ... smile ...

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2010 at 7:18 AM Very very interesting and prophetic as well! LUv, Andrea

Royal Trevino March 6, 2010 at 6:20 PM ohhhh... 2012 comes to mind for some reason.. well writen irma

Carol Sunshine Brown February 13, 2010 at 9:48 AM Thank you for sharing your poetry here at PoetrySoup. I have enjoyed reading it today. Hoping you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Irma. Love, Carol