Breath Is Seen

Days are cold, beyond frozen
My eyes are stuck together
Breath is seen in the frigid air
Winter has been reached

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 6, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Ooohooohoo! Yes indeed I remember winter days like that up in the Northwest Territories. With the wind it used to get 60 below. Good job here my friend. If it's for the contest it should rank high. God Bless, JB
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December 6, 2011 at 4:55 AM
I really love this form of poetry. It works so well to express thoughts and I really like your thoughts in this one, Russsell. Very vivid and when I look out my window for sure it is winter.
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