Breath Flows

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Breath flows, heart beats, all doings done Cause of imbalance, thought Cessation the way, come undone Fear from fears, ego brought With love resonating God’s will co-creating Joy suffused, pulsating Soul glows Breath flows 30-November-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:32:00 PM

Beautifully zen. Breathtaking.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2021 9:56:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2021 1:28:00 PM

Great feeling in your poem, US. God's hands of created art work of love. I hope you are well. Thank you for your visit to my Waterfall poem. Hugs Eve

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2021 5:57:00 PM

Happy you dropped by, Eve, hope you are doing well

Anil Deo

Date: 11/30/2021 10:42:00 AM

Yes, Sir (I think?) this is meditative and gives me joy when we speak of breath, cessation of thought ... or mastering how and when we use thought. I love this diction, "Fear from fears, ego brought/" shalom, shalom fellow-Seeker & co-Creator

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2021 5:56:00 PM

Thank you, Anil! Happy you enjoyed

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/30/2021 9:03:00 AM

I pray that God keeps co-creating with us, we so need the beauty of poets such as you, Thankyou Seeker, :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thank you, dear Mystic Rose! :)