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Breath Flows

Breath flows, heart beats, all doings done
Cause of imbalance, thought 
Cessation the way, come undone
Fear from fears, ego brought

With love resonating
God’s will co-creating
Joy suffused, pulsating 

Soul glows
Breath flows

30-November-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:32 PM Beautifully zen. Breathtaking. Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2021 at 9:56 PM Thank you, Caren!

Eve Roper November 30, 2021 at 1:28 PM Great feeling in your poem, US. God's hands of created art work of love. I hope you are well. Thank you for your visit to my Waterfall poem. Hugs Eve Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2021 at 5:57 PM Happy you dropped by, Eve, hope you are doing well

Anil Deo November 30, 2021 at 10:42 AM Yes, Sir (I think?) this is meditative and gives me joy when we speak of breath, cessation of thought ... or mastering how and when we use thought. I love this diction, "Fear from fears, ego brought/" shalom, shalom fellow-Seeker & co-Creator Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2021 at 5:56 PM Thank you, Anil! Happy you enjoyed

Mystic Rose Rose November 30, 2021 at 9:03 AM I pray that God keeps co-creating with us, we so need the beauty of poets such as you, Thankyou Seeker, :) Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2021 at 9:08 AM Thank you, dear Mystic Rose! :)