Breath As Whisper

Breath of deep relief 
Escaped as a soft whisper
Lost in the dark night
Ending a tortuous past
Closing forever cycles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Feelings of relief from past, well articulated in this Tanka!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Thank you Vijay.
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