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Breath As Whisper

Breath of deep relief Escaped as a soft whisper Lost in the dark night Ending a tortuous past Closing forever cycles

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Date: 11/5/2017 2:39:00 PM
Feelings of relief from past, well articulated in this Tanka!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/5/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.

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