Holly Bohto Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Breath Apon Memories

Your breath
apon
my memories

Twirling
apon
loves weaponry 

Cycling
between
lying signs

Out of this
whirling
I have climbed

Your breath
apon
my memories

Spinning
apon
loves treachery

Blowing
between
hurtful rhymes

Out of this
tornado
I have survived

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Mark Martin January 5, 2017 at 1:36 PM Great imagery! Congrats on your win Holly! :-) Holly Bohto January 5, 2017 at 8:04 PM Stormy times. Hurtful rhymes. Artistic finds. Minding mine. Thank you Mark:)

Chris Green November 22, 2016 at 7:19 AM That next to last stanza did hurt, poetry used to cause pain is not poetry at all, in my opinion. But, the ending was perfect, you survived and are probably a much better person for it. Nicely done Holly