Breath

The outside is bleary;
The glass, moist with my breath:
The essence of my life
Erases the existence of another.

-Pin Dew (03/05/2017)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duncan Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 3:48 PM
I really like the way you write :)
Dew Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 1:03 AM
Thank you so much :)
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