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the following poem based upon this image--from online poetry class

BREATH

Born from the hush before dawn,  
Beating the pulse of the unseen,  
Binding dust to living form,  
Brushed from the mouth of the Eternal,  
Bearing the weight of our days,  
Becoming wind through mortal clay,  
Blessing each fleeting moment.
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Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 6:03 AM
You nailed it.
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 8:59 PM
Excellent work in that form
Hind Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 4:19 PM
great Pleiades :)
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