Notes About The Poem

Breast feeding a natural and healthy way of feeding a baby is often a social taboo in westernised worlds! In many parts of the world the mother breast feeds her child with a lullaby and the child kicks her feet in tune to her song and often falls asleep! 
 

Breast Feeding

Lips feed in joy of her mum,
feet kick in glee to her hum,
My heart beat taps to her song,
Drop by drop rain on a drum!


3rd placement
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Sponsor Jenish Somadas
Written 20/03/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Canerdy Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 9:20 AM
This is lovely, Krish. CONGRATS! Janice
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Janice!
Hawkens Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Beautiful Jueju poem and fantastic imagery. Congratulations on a most deserved win. JC Hawkens
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Thanks JC. Thanks for your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 4:42 PM
this is SO COOL. I can't remember if my babies did the feet kicking thing or if I sang to them or not. it was SO long ago. But i nursed my daughter to nearly age 3 and loved it.(my son did not like it and went off at five months) i felt so rejected. He went straight to a little cup with a lid on it. I never once put a bottle in his mouth becaue I was so intent on only letting him nurse! Congrats on your win. Krish
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 12:15 AM
Andrea Thanks! Growing up in India this was something very natural and being part of a large family, breast feeding was something mothers loved and were proud of. Prolactin, the hormone that is secreted in the process has been credited with Maternal bonding to the child. Also it is ready milk immediately available at the right temperature with the right nutrients. So something to be promoted in society.
Callus Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 4:29 PM
This is a lovely Jueju, Krish. Love the image you created. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Thank you Paul! I enjoyed your write too. Kind regards
Somadas Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Splendid imagery..Congrats on your wonderful win Krish..
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Thanks Jenish! Thanks for another splendid contest. Has produced such brilliant poems!
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 3:39 PM
beautiful image... breast feeding is natural but looked down upon...I breast fed but only at home, I pumped if I needed to go out anywhere... good write Krish!
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 3:50 PM
Thank you Sandra. Indeed. Young mothers should be encouraged to breast feed to burst the myth of losing one’s figure and all that! Also helps maternal bonding through prolactin according to some.
Michael Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Triplets of raindrops roll to climax...then quietly, the silence of drums...by the milk of Mother's love Baby flies...Nice one
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Thanks my friend! One of the most beautiful scenes in nature!
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