Breast Cancer

dreaded breast cancer
stages of growth tenderness
first thought is despair

main objective to destroy
shattering whole families

Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 24, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Carly, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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June 25, 2012 at 8:50 PM
Yes, the first thought has to be such devastating despair!! And the last part about shattering families is so true.
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June 18, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Hi there Caryl, I really appreciated this tanka entry this morning..many women have had their breast cancer scare and any poem written to educate others is a poem of valor! Love, Gwendolen
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June 10, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Caryl, your last line says it all about the impact Cancer has on families.. Wishing you the best for the contest :) Wilma
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