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Dark crown positions an imminent moon, while the car benign a simple swan tune, by a male world-renowned steady croon, quaffs from a sweetheart, abrupt swoon, as twain souls dissolution, way too soon, while a solo spirit on, strangely immune, limits another whose heart is now hewn, of an unsalted berry to a strained prune. 2019 December 31

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Date: 1/5/2020 9:54:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this .... exemplifying what your poem requires. God bless you.
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Date: 1/5/2020 10:08:00 PM
Rhyming yes and not need to be aligned as mine appears, thanks!~@wk

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