Breakup Senryus

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The question arises - in high school - "how do I break up with...."
So, as a public service - may I present:
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Handy break-up Senryus. Pick one to quickly, cut that old relationship cord: I'm sorry, What'd you say? I can't hear you *confused look* - we’re breaking up. You’re the guy that every school girl seems to want... - today's their lucky day. It's time we took our relationship to the previous level. I still cherish the initial misconceptions I had about you.

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John Gondolf

Date: 9/9/2020 4:06:00 AM

"...today's their lucky day" this is my favorite. This poem brought to mind a song by Paul Simon from the 70's, way before your time, "Fifty Ways to Leave Your Lover." I enjoyed your wry sense of humor this morning, Anais, have a great day. John

Anais Vionet
Date: 9/10/2020 3:38:00 AM

Ahh, I listened to it - I can see that =] I like the humorous pieces every bit as much as the "deep" ones... Thank you =]