Breakup Senrus Ii

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sometimes you have to pull that relationship rip cord.
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More break-up Senryus to quickly, subtly cut that relationship cord: You’re a guy, I’m a girl... it turns out we’re just too different! Look, It’s not you – it’s me - turns out I don’t like you much anymore. Allegory time! You're a turkey, ok? And I'm going on a diet. You smile at him, and then say: "You've helped realize I'm gay."

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Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/30/2020 10:40:00 PM

- Go girl..!... Men are so useful for this purpose.... A lover and a friend probably best found in a woman.... I've not gone there, but men make it easy to consider...

Anais Vionet
Date: 10/1/2020 10:28:00 AM

Well, I haven't "gone there" either - but it's a handy ploy =] Thank you =]

John Gondolf

Date: 9/30/2020 10:11:00 AM

I always love your humorous senryus, Anais, I needed a good laugh after last night... I had to laugh at the last one. My youngest daughter who is 23 now, had a guy borderline stalking her in high school. She actually told him she was gay to get him to leave her alone...it worked.

Anais Vionet
Date: 9/30/2020 10:36:00 AM

Yes, that one sounds particularly effective =]