Teanne Von Der Porten Poet Free verse

Breakup - Pining For Empty

The sun shines briefly then disappears
Taking my mood with it
Breadcrumbs of hope dissipate as hours tick by 
disappointment kicks in again
I want to be excited about something
Not always fighting to survive
I will only tolerate the burn for so long
Before I put out the flame

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Beata Agustin June 15, 2024 at 5:44 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.