Breakup Days

clouds r geting angry n storming hard...
leaves r getin dry n falling apart...
winds r getin haunted n shoutin loud...
reasons r out of my mind lyk im in 
shroud...

im frightend wid d dark moonlight..lyk 
blaming me..
bt getin a hope frm light tower...4 
continuing it...
waves of sea r rising rising upwrds..lyk 
tellin me...
reasons r in ur heart ..u just hv to admit 
it...

my nervs r getin frozen...n makin me 
numb..
my head z wreckin upside down...lyk 
thrown n broken..
deep inside dere r wrds of urs blazin...n 
makin me crumb...
servin u hs taken me into trashes...nw its 
forbidden..

nw im sailin in an ocean lyk a free soul 
wid passion..
liftin myslf up n touchin sky wid naked 
eyes...
reasons r hard to find nw..pausin ds 
commotion..
till dn flyin free spirited n searchin 4 
hidden bays...

if u like ds poen or evn nt...just post ur cmnts...i wud realy love to observe dt...thnks for readin...

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Date: 11/20/2013 2:42:00 PM
You have your own style, I lenjoyed your poem. It has an exotic feel to it.
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 11/28/2013 2:50:00 PM
Thanku 4 such a good feedbck :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:44:00 PM
- A good poem, Parivartana. - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/18/2013 2:50:00 PM
thnx anne...gud to c u after long tym... :) :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:06:00 PM
Well penned....searchin 4 hidden bays...good line.LOved it
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/18/2013 2:37:00 PM
Thnks litan :) :)...hv a luk on odrs poem too..
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