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Breaking Veins

Butterflies within the valves
Petal wings that slice you right
Relatively long pieces with little packages of greatness
Wholeness spreading in the flux of blood
Insects turn their heads towards then
Turn away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2010 12:23:00 PM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Dennis. Love, Carol
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