Breaking Up With You

Our relationship has become quite hostile
Yet you ride by on your unicorn and smile
There's only one thing left to do
And that is to break up with you
Your smiles now turn to tears
As you gallop through the stars
Soon you'll disappear
Leaving just your avatar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Congrats on your great win my friend!!!!!
A  Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Joseph, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~
A. Sharma Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Wow a great one Joseph ! A perfect break up ,, congrats on huge win !
Nance Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Ha good one Joseph, I like that. Grats on your win ;)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations, Joseph, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Joseph
A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:56 AM
WOW, Joseph, you had me at UNICORN and smile...LOL... I love this.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
Macfarlane Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 10:13 PM
I love this one Joseph, well done!
Lindley Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Cheer up Joseph. There are millions more unicorn riding vixens in the galaxy! Great write my friend, good luck in the contest!!
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 1:18 AM
The reason for the break up very surprising, Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 12:28 AM
well, I had no idea what to write for this contest, but I sure wish I had written THIS one!!! love it.
Smith Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 11:38 PM
Nice one Joseph my friend.
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Ohh like it Joseph. hugs jan xxx
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