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Breaking Up Or Making Up

When we got married you said I was the only one But you disappear for days and leave me with our son Go off with your mates and leave me high and dry I’ve since heard subtle rumours it’s not just ‘you and I’ Now you hide your mobile phone and even I can’t call I thought our life was perfect – am I heading for a fall I share my life with you; I believed we were in clover If you’re cheating on me now I’m telling you ITS OVER You are and will always be my number one Marrying you was the greatest thing I've ever done I refuse to become a victim of the rumour mill Evil tongues have always gossiped and always will All my workforce with you will completely agree They hate my new mobile telephone policy But that ban on their use remains in place Even my darling if it is your wrath I must face Work widowed you are, cheated upon you are not. This crisis will soon be over and I'm taking you somewhere hot. Oh my darling thank you, I was really starting to worry I know I shouldn’t doubt you but my mind is in a flurry Looking after the baby all day can be quite a strain If he’s upset and crying all day it really is a drain We really need to make sure we have some time for us But you are always working and I hate to make a fuss It makes me feel so guilty you need to take a break If you leave work early then Patrick won’t be awake I’ll be ready waiting for you with a kiss and open arms You will find me in the bedroom I’ll surrender to your charms You are my whole world and the centre of all I try to do I work to provide for my family but from the start you knew When you became my wife before God we made our vows Though I think he'll understand we may have our tiffs and rows But he nor you should forgive me if ever I betray To hear you ever say those words would be too high a price to pay So I'll see you later and believe me tonight I'll be on time Because I've got a hot date with you, you’re forever mine. Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson 2nd June 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/6/2014 1:56:00 PM
Jadazzle What a truthful, powerful, honest and sincere write. Marriage is not always good and happy. But compromise, strength and love will see you through. Thank you for the nice comment on my See The Truth poem.
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Date: 7/6/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Robin. I so love working with Darren and consider myself the luckiest lady in the world to have him as my writing partner and a wonderful friend. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/5/2014 9:18:00 AM
Lovely story! Great collaboration!
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:12:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Arthur - we have so much fun when we write together. Hugs jJn xxx
Date: 6/3/2014 2:18:00 PM
endearing expression of marriage much like your poetry pairing.. greeat collab.. huggs
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Date: 6/3/2014 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Nette for the lovely comment. I call Darren my 'cyber hubby' - I'm the luckiest lady in the world to have him in my life he is a very special friend to me. Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 6/2/2014 9:12:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Jadazzle United
Date: 6/3/2014 12:26:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Jeremy. Hugs Jan x
Date: 6/2/2014 4:59:00 PM
This is a beautifully written co-write, Jan and Darren. Husbands and wives stick together through the good times and the bad. I would say more but I'm mourning the loss of a dear friend now. Please forgive my brief comment. Love to both of you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:18:00 PM
I read your poem Carolyn I am so sorry to hear of your loss. Thanks for dropping by your comments mean the world to us. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/2/2014 4:54:00 PM
Hi Jan and Darren, WOW... That was incredible!!!! I was enthralled in this story from the beginning to the end...What a clever and entertaining tender write this was to share with us. Appreciate your talents the two of you :~) Separately and together you make monumental writes!!! Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:20:00 PM
Oh Deborah I glow with pride when you comment on my poems you truly are a very special friend. Hugs Jan xxx I love writing with Darren and am honoured to be his poetry soup wife and to have him as my very cherished and loved cyber husband. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Date: 6/2/2014 1:58:00 PM
A wonderful story with a happy ending..You might end up with baby number two :)
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Date: 6/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
I'm willing if Darren is - he doesn't need any encouragement Tim LOL. He's the best cyber husband any woman could have I am truly lucky I found him before anyone else snapped him up! Guess when you work together so closely you can't help develop such a strong friendship - we are all very lucky to have found wonderful people to collaborate with Tim :) :-) Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

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