Kristi Victoria Monreal Hancock Poet Free verse

Breaking Up Early

Breaking Up Early
(Argus)
September 10, 2015

I chased you:
Time was in my favor.
Living in this sometime world,
Words blowin' free,
Falling out of my mouth.
Reckless, I couldn't carry on nor care.

The king will come,
The one I'll give my heart to,
A poetic leaf
And a stream of tears
Will be received
Willingly.

My heart
Wants to collapse.

This warrior
Will throw down the sword.
I can't keep up,
I can't think straight
Anymore.

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Poet Destroyer A September 14, 2015 at 3:11 PM Kristi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2015 at 1:37 PM - Kristi Victoria, a sweet and lovely poem - I welcome you with your first poems here on P- Soup - Good luck ..... have fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A September 11, 2015 at 9:01 AM Kristi, welcome to poetry soup... Love skat