Breaking Up

I am such an idoit All this time you said you loved me I never doubted you one bit But I was wrong You made me feel amazing Beautiful and special Why did you have to lie to me? I could've handled the truth if it came from you Though our paths seperated And what you did hurt me I guess I must be stupid Because I still miss you

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Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 5/28/2009 12:10:00 PM

Everybody has gone through this. When I got my heart broken by the girl i loved so much, i thought i still loved her. but the pain will go away. Thank you for commenting on my poems, and keep up your good writing too.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/25/2009 11:27:00 AM

Jessica, (Pablo- Hmmm are you a painter, too? - another Pablo Picasso) You have expressed your hurt well in this poem. Unfortunately many people make mistakes that hurt others. And very often, they do not have the courage to admit their error for fear of retribution. Forgiveness is an option. Lovingly, Dane