Breaking In Two

I have put my trust in alot of people,
But only to be crushed.
I thought you were different though
And once again,
I was wrong.

I gave you my broken heart
To be mended,
But all you did
Was break it further
Down the middle.

I trusted you
And you let me down;
Taking my heart
And crushing it
To the ground.

I loved you
And you said that
You loved me too,
But when you cheated,
All the pieces came unglued.

Now how can I love again; 
Give my heart away,
If everyone I have ever loved
Has left me
To walk astray?

When I gave my heart to you,
It all felt better,
But now,
How can anyone love me
And all the pieces too
That you have
Broken in two?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/23/2011 8:28:00 AM
Good descriptive wording here. Fine Job.
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:35:00 AM
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:49:00 AM
Very sad and full of frustrations on the betrayal in love, Kaci
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