Breaking Hope
Snow fall
while the surging wind blows
on the ground
where the roses mourn
as the sun
tries to break free
from the thick clouds
like a ray of light
after a long long night
and the dew
dim and glimmer
for the passing
of the old
and the birth
of a new day.
December 28, 2022
You Choose Poetry Contest (8th place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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