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Breaking Free

The Soul lurches upward trying to break free The Body ropes it wrestling desperately This constant struggle does not enlighten me

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/2/2021 2:56:00 AM

It does not enlighten me either.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/31/2021 11:28:00 AM

Isn't that why your God created holy doughnuts? Aloha! Rico

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/31/2021 12:32:00 PM

With my dyslexia, I had always thought they were doughy hole-nuts. Thanks for the illuminations, Rico. :) gw

Anselmo Boles

Date: 5/30/2021 7:39:00 PM

Sometimes it is so hard to make a decision, because knowing that the outcome is unalterable, becomes a mental dilemma. This one is Solid Gershon!!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/30/2021 8:20:00 PM

Thanks for the 'solid' review there, Anselmo. Peace and Tranquility, gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/30/2021 7:38:00 PM

Sometimes I feel that very real conflict. First one, then the other attempts to wrestle free. I definitely am still not enlightened!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/30/2021 8:20:00 PM

I'm with you. The struggle is a searing one. ~ gw

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/30/2021 7:29:00 PM

muse of the day :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/30/2021 8:19:00 PM

Hey, thanks, Seeker! Ole! ~ Senor Gershon