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Breaking Down of Walls

Initial separation attempts Are now in the past I’m curious to see How long this thing will last Confused by new thoughts And if emotions prove true Where would that lead us And what would we do? My heart and soul are shaking You amaze me without trying You seem to really understand My heart’s intricate design You spark a fire inside of me You enlighten my life, my ways You’re the artist playing my heart strings Upon which my emotion lays Once an unrequited queen My attempts to remain strong Are broken down by what seems to be Hearts beating the same song Not knowing where life could take us We pause to ask ourselves why Were we chosen to be more than friends Or simply passers-by?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 11:55:00 AM
This was an awesome poem ash, I really loved it, keep it up
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Date: 9/23/2009 8:59:00 PM
Very nice quatrain expressing what love is doing to you, yet still not totally sure, if this will last. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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