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Breaking Down

Caught in the depths of my shadows within Breathing in the plague of all the vermin Nauseated stomach and bile on my chin Lips begin to crack from dehydrated skin Follicles die out so my hair starts to thin Hard to move forward when my head only spins Hallucinations of bright lights and shiny sequins These days are already over before they begin   My mind rests in pain with all of the aspirin While drowning out my system with tonic & gin These days are already over before they begin Caught in the depths of my shadows within bmdavey@06/18/18

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Date: 10/31/2019 10:34:00 AM
Third poem in and sorry but I gotta to add you to my ones I follow list, can't get enough here of the pain within . . . -_-
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/31/2019 10:53:00 AM
It is very real my friend
Date: 7/24/2018 11:05:00 AM
oh dark but well placed thank you duncan
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 4:43:00 PM
No thank you

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