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Breaking Dawn

Breaking Dawn
                  is to wake up at will
                  of the hunger  living...
                  spread the eyes of
                  curiosity...
                  awakening from the past,
                  thinking above the future...
                  renew legs
                   to provide work to the hands
                  and supply the mind to  brain...
                  Breaking Dawn,
                  is to light the best
                  of what fitting the world,
                  liven up life
                  to postpone
                    death... !

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/24/2021 11:30:00 AM

Hello Alaka, i never have seen the dawn come up. It would be better than death. Salute Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hello Alaka, you were very lucky to see this happen. I hope to see it one day. Salute Darlene.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/26/2021 10:47:00 PM

To say the truth i only saw It once AND It is wonderful... you observe the planet coming from dark to light slowly AND we feel that we are part of the universe... salute, dear alkas

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2021 9:13:00 PM

to postpone death Nice writing.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/26/2021 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Alex, salute alkas