Arthur Vaso Poet Quatrain

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Breaking Bad

Breaking Bad


Criminals
dance with slum lords
they shed fake tears
victims they shout
from Ivory towers

Mock and attack
they of dark cloth and deceit
possesses no real God
they whoreship only their prey
living by night not day

Some even screech praise untowards
sick is the mind who follows
dead morals and upended graves
they really are the bully's slaves
Yet their churches pew is full

Criminals all
singing love songs
sewing fear and anger
no wonder God got fed up
evicting them one and all

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Robert Lindley April 11, 2020 at 5:35 AM A much belated congratulations on POTD honors for this fine piece. A message of truth and should stand as a warning to those that live and love to attack innocent victims. So true, they attack, hide and then themselves play as if they are the victim. Must be some kind of insanity... A fav, bold truth and a gem too...

Alexis Y. March 28, 2020 at 12:16 AM Hi Arthur, Good quote and stellar write. In my opinion the only person a fake person is ( really)fooling is themselves! I may be late but congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith March 27, 2020 at 12:22 PM A belated congratulations for POTD honors Arthur, well deserved...

Charles Messina March 18, 2020 at 6:26 AM Some of the people that comment on my FB posts should read this (lol) Great write, Art. Congrats on POTD. All the best and stay safe brother. -CM

Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2020 at 2:44 PM ... behind the veil ... we find the truth, Arthur - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Take care my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 16, 2020 at 12:58 PM They keep on practising deceit, truth is not in them, Congrats on POTD Arthur..

Eve Roper March 16, 2020 at 12:08 PM The true perpetrator lavishes in their victory Which all their doing is Bathing in bad grace Truly an underachiever

Winged Warrior March 16, 2020 at 9:17 AM "Breaking Bad News!"...the wolf lies down with the lamb...yah right!... Congrats!! on POTD!! Art...a secular write...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Mark Koplin March 16, 2020 at 5:55 AM Amen brother! Congrats on POTD

Besma Riabi Dziri March 16, 2020 at 4:56 AM Souls whose hearts and minds filled with a huge void lack the blessings of Faith and Love, have no taste of a true feel and genuine care.. nothing for them to share! But spreading all that is fake and evil.. a well crafted rendition! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Arthur! My deepest regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham March 16, 2020 at 3:04 AM Oh they're good at twisting things and making you you look the baddie. Congrats on POTD.Arthur. Tom

Brenda Chiri March 15, 2020 at 9:22 PM That quote looks familiar lol! Some people believe in the idea of it I think and that's not how it's suppose to be! And no one is sin less it's ridiculous to even attempt it!;)

Jan Allison March 15, 2020 at 7:54 PM Think your quote says it all backed up by your own words. Just have tolook at the recent blogs victimiser who hides behind the bible quotes now turned to victim Hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry March 15, 2020 at 4:20 PM Some get attracted to the words but forget who is really speaking and don't realise the words don't equate to their actions.