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Breaking Bad Criminals dance with slum lords they shed fake tears victims they shout from Ivory towers Mock and attack they of dark cloth and deceit possesses no real God they whoreship only their prey living by night not day Some even screech praise untowards sick is the mind who follows dead morals and upended graves they really are the bully's slaves Yet their churches pew is full Criminals all singing love songs sewing fear and anger no wonder God got fed up evicting them one and all

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Date: 6/7/2020 7:34:00 AM
On reading this a second time, I experienced it in a completely different way. I also agree with Rob, “We will know them by their fruit.” A belated congrats Art. ;0)
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Date: 4/11/2020 5:35:00 AM
A much belated congratulations on POTD honors for this fine piece. A message of truth and should stand as a warning to those that live and love to attack innocent victims. So true, they attack, hide and then themselves play as if they are the victim. Must be some kind of insanity... A fav, bold truth and a gem too...
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Date: 3/28/2020 12:16:00 AM
Hi Arthur, Good quote and stellar write. In my opinion the only person a fake person is ( really)fooling is themselves! I may be late but congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/27/2020 12:22:00 PM
A belated congratulations for POTD honors Arthur, well deserved...
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:26:00 AM
Some of the people that comment on my FB posts should read this (lol) Great write, Art. Congrats on POTD. All the best and stay safe brother. -CM
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Date: 3/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
... behind the veil ... we find the truth, Arthur - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Take care my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2020 12:58:00 PM
They keep on practising deceit, truth is not in them, Congrats on POTD Arthur..
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Date: 3/16/2020 12:08:00 PM
The true perpetrator lavishes in their victory Which all their doing is Bathing in bad grace Truly an underachiever
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Date: 3/16/2020 10:38:00 AM
People of faith are not perfect. It seems that nowadays they are an easy and acceptable target. My side, your side, his side, her side? Let’s all come together and it can be our side. It’s not wise to assume God’s intentions lest we be the ones who are evicted.
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:35:00 AM
Good advice concerning the assumptions, especially with the divine and a peep's eternity, but, we are advised to notice the fruits. With that, there is a duty to warn.
Date: 3/16/2020 9:17:00 AM
"Breaking Bad News!"...the wolf lies down with the lamb...yah right!... Congrats!! on POTD!! Art...a secular write...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 3/16/2020 5:55:00 AM
Amen brother! Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/16/2020 4:56:00 AM
Souls whose hearts and minds filled with a huge void lack the blessings of Faith and Love, have no taste of a true feel and genuine care.. nothing for them to share! But spreading all that is fake and evil.. a well crafted rendition! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Arthur! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 3/16/2020 3:04:00 AM
Oh they're good at twisting things and making you you look the baddie. Congrats on POTD.Arthur. Tom
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Date: 3/15/2020 9:22:00 PM
That quote looks familiar lol! Some people believe in the idea of it I think and that's not how it's suppose to be! And no one is sin less it's ridiculous to even attempt it!;)
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Date: 3/15/2020 7:54:00 PM
Think your quote says it all backed up by your own words. Just have tolook at the recent blogs victimiser who hides behind the bible quotes now turned to victim Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2020 4:20:00 PM
Some get attracted to the words but forget who is really speaking and don't realise the words don't equate to their actions.
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