Breaking

chest of loneliness
panting against stained window
nailed with broken leaves


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:43 PM
I am fascinated by this one. Congrats.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win Daniel.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:10 PM
this one makes me think of a bird pinned to the window or some other small creature? very inventive. Congrats on your win.
Puddifoot Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:01 PM
this was a really deep, profound one, and I put at least three interpretations on it during the course of judging - they're probably all wrong! this one fascinated me, drew me back to it again and again - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Ebbs Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Congrats...:)
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:17 PM
deep sad haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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