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chest of loneliness panting against stained window nailed with broken leaves Creative Haiku 9.21.2014

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Date: 9/28/2014 8:43:00 PM
I am fascinated by this one. Congrats.
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Date: 9/28/2014 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Daniel.
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:10:00 PM
this one makes me think of a bird pinned to the window or some other small creature? very inventive. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:01:00 PM
this was a really deep, profound one, and I put at least three interpretations on it during the course of judging - they're probably all wrong! this one fascinated me, drew me back to it again and again - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:48:00 PM
Congrats...:)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:17:00 PM
deep sad haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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