I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen Poet Free verse

Breakfast Tea

The fog thickens
streching up and over
the edge of my mug
leaning on the windowsill
draped in wool
waking slowly
A deep breath
to rid the morning frost
From my chest mixing 
with mint green
and honey
so sweet
remembering your eyes on me
lifts the fog

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Douglas Brown August 2, 2019 at 8:09 PM Nice!

Richard Lamoureux January 8, 2018 at 1:21 PM So sweet.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian January 5, 2018 at 1:46 AM Touching and lovely. Congrats. Will follow you. nnb

Gregory Richard Barden January 4, 2018 at 10:13 PM Very well done, Sarah - congratulations on your win, and Happy New Year, my friend! This is quite beautiful ... :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 3, 2018 at 1:06 AM Congratulations, Sarah on your win with such a romantic poem. I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen January 3, 2018 at 4:01 AM Thanks! I’m glad you enjoy it!!

Line Gauthier January 2, 2018 at 8:25 AM Congrats on your win, Sarah. Very sweet... must be all that honey. Best wishes. I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen January 3, 2018 at 4:01 AM :) thanks very much!

Sheila Haskins December 29, 2017 at 4:34 AM Beautiful imagery, a comforting romantic poem. Lovely! I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen December 29, 2017 at 4:37 AM Thank you for your comment, and for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!