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Breakfast Tea

The fog thickens
streching up and over
the edge of my mug
leaning on the windowsill
draped in wool
waking slowly
A deep breath
to rid the morning frost
From my chest mixing 
with mint green
and honey
so sweet
remembering your eyes on me
lifts the fog

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/2/2019 8:09:00 PM
Nice!
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:21:00 PM
So sweet.
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:46:00 AM
Touching and lovely. Congrats. Will follow you. nnb
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Date: 1/4/2018 10:13:00 PM
Very well done, Sarah - congratulations on your win, and Happy New Year, my friend! This is quite beautiful ... :-)
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Date: 1/3/2018 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Sarah on your win with such a romantic poem.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 1/3/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thanks! I’m glad you enjoy it!!
Date: 1/2/2018 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sarah. Very sweet... must be all that honey. Best wishes.
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 1/3/2018 4:01:00 AM
:) thanks very much!
Date: 12/29/2017 4:34:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, a comforting romantic poem. Lovely!
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I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen
Date: 12/29/2017 4:37:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, and for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!

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