Breakfast On the Run

eyelids toss and turn as the dam breaks scrambled eggs and toast floats a juice glass buoy 5/20/2020
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Michael Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 8:58 AM
It has the air of a health good morning...Nice imagery
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Proxenos Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 4:49 AM
Breakfast on the run, some thing we have all learnt to do i this fast life but reading down I see you got your inspiration from a book you read about a dam that broke in Michigan - sad. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Either way you see the poem :)
Romios Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 5:22 AM
I got the inspiration right. Had zero to do with 19. Homes are in danger and bridges. My cousin has a summer home there, Hope he does not lose it! Oh, yes..,that state with a gov that is cracked. Horrible. Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Nothing to do with the covid, you’re right! Dams bursting are no joke!
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:56 PM
Oh-so-descriptive!!! No lifeguards during CV-19, eh?! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 4:24 PM
My inspiration is the sad dam that broke in Michigan. Recently read the book The Johnstown Flood.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 10:13 AM
I am ready to move in with you my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 4:23 PM
C’mon...wink wink! <3
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Mmmm nice image to get the taste buds fired up. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Thanks, Tom!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Oh this is cool. Reminds me of biking and eating ;), xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:49 AM
LOL...of course :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:41 AM
(while birding too of course)
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Many can relate to this imagery you portrayed, Kim..scrambled eggs and toast floats a juice glass buoy--nicely done!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
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