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Breakfast On the Run

eyelids toss and turn as the dam breaks scrambled eggs and toast floats a juice glass buoy 5/20/2020

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Arturo Michael
Date: 5/31/2020 8:58:00 AM
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It has the air of a health good morning...Nice imagery
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 11:50:00 AM
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Thank you, my friend!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 5/24/2020 4:49:00 AM
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Breakfast on the run, some thing we have all learnt to do i this fast life but reading down I see you got your inspiration from a book you read about a dam that broke in Michigan - sad. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 11:50:00 AM
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Either way you see the poem :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/23/2020 5:22:00 AM
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I got the inspiration right. Had zero to do with 19. Homes are in danger and bridges. My cousin has a summer home there, Hope he does not lose it! Oh, yes..,that state with a gov that is cracked. Horrible. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2020 2:49:00 PM
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Nothing to do with the covid, you’re right! Dams bursting are no joke!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/20/2020 8:56:00 PM
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Oh-so-descriptive!!! No lifeguards during CV-19, eh?! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:24:00 PM
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My inspiration is the sad dam that broke in Michigan. Recently read the book The Johnstown Flood.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2020 10:13:00 AM
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I am ready to move in with you my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:23:00 PM
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C’mon...wink wink! <3
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/20/2020 9:00:00 AM
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Mmmm nice image to get the taste buds fired up. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 9:26:00 AM
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Thanks, Tom!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/20/2020 8:41:00 AM
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Oh this is cool. Reminds me of biking and eating ;), xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 8:49:00 AM
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LOL...of course :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/20/2020 8:41:00 AM
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(while birding too of course)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2020 8:22:00 AM
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Many can relate to this imagery you portrayed, Kim..scrambled eggs and toast floats a juice glass buoy--nicely done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 8:49:00 AM
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Thank you, dear friend!

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