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Breaker of Hearts

She's a breaker of hearts With her nose in the air She thinks she's special A vision so rare A beautiful goddess With long flowing lines An absolute treasure Like pure vintage wine We can truly be victims When loneliness starts Seduced by the beauty Of a breaker of hearts We sometimes forget Where happy begins Deep in our soul It comes from within She's a breaker of hearts Bad news in disguise Keep on searching Don't let lust cloud your eyes! © Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/18/2020 10:40:00 PM

Great and sound advice for anyone. The fourth stanza is especially true. It is what is in the inside that truly counts. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2020 5:18:00 AM

Yes from within! I'm full of it! LOL "Advice" of course....

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/3/2012 8:07:00 AM

Been there Jack, i was just another fool for a pretty face who had her own agenda. Nicely written my friend,blessings Carl

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2012 10:05:00 AM

Methinks we've all been there at one time on our lives! LOL Thanks for the kind words, Carl... Jack

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/2/2012 11:18:00 AM

Your poems just keep getting better and better... Love this one!... I think it would again describe my son... We think we spoiled him a little too much... He's all about looks... Thank goodness he studies too... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2012 12:47:00 PM

Got one of those... thinks he's the cat's meow!!! Don't believe I just said that! LOL Love and happy thoughts, Jake xoxoxox

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/2/2012 4:25:00 AM

Wow Jack...Im really enjoying my cup of tea reading a poem or three of yours LOL......Shaz

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2012 4:38:00 AM

You are mucho kind! Enjoy your tea and enjoy your day, sweet friend! Love and hugs, Jack

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/1/2012 7:11:00 PM

Sound advice Jack. Great poem.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 7:34:00 PM

Thank you my good friend! Your positive comments are always welcome... have a great Sunday!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/1/2012 5:39:00 PM

Seasoned advice, Jack....nice write! made a thermos of dark brew this mornin' to bring to Ma....she needs a new hip and is in rough shape...prayers, if ya got time, thanks...jimbo

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 6:22:00 PM

Prayers and good wishes are on the way... give her a hug for me! Cheers, Jack

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/1/2012 5:34:00 PM

Yes there are many temptations, this is a wise warning to heed. well written my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 6:21:00 PM

Just call me a wise old owl! LOL Thanks Mr. Richard!

John Posey

Date: 12/1/2012 3:07:00 PM

Jack, This is a cute, but serious, post. I've been there and different perspectives governed the occasions. You're always pleasant to visit and I always leave satisfied knowing I have been with the best... Cheers, my friend.... Jake .... BTW.... You might like a little song lyric I wrote.... "Watch My Ruby Shine"... Jake

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 3:30:00 PM

Thanks for your very kind words my friend! They are very much appreciated! Checked out your "Watch My Ruby Shine"! Kudos! Cheers, Jack

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/1/2012 2:24:00 PM

Perfect flow and meter..so many heartbreakers [sigh] Light & Love

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 2:52:00 PM

You are sweet... thank you dear Debbie! Hugs, Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2012 8:15:00 AM

It is beautifully written, Jack. - Hope your weekend will be relaxing. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2012 8:35:00 AM

Right back at you, my dear Anne Lise! Thanks for the kind words... big hugs and much love, Jack