Break Up

The door you closed behind,
The love you left out blinded.
It’s me, who’s crying out loud,
It’s you who’s looking so proud!
Such love I could not find…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Celine. Love, Carol
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April 13, 2012 at 10:33 PM
Celine~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD
Mehta Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:29 PM
Well penned Limerick with nice images, Celine
Spence Sr Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:21 PM
This is okay and I like the flow of the words. The message is also right on point. Great job! Joseph
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