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Break the mirror To probe the unseen, break habit routine, that without mirrors, we feel bliss tremors. Sans thought, ego dies. Soul in relief sighs, obtaining release, flowing like the breeze. Once empty within, God search may begin, yet many falter right at the altar. Labels we define are thoughts that confine, so we must let go; in childlike trust, flow. Emptiness is filled by bliss, as God willed, ours to claim just now, if we but allow. Arguments fall flat. There no this or that. Our soul is God's light, shining within bright. Drop delusion veil. In the void set sail. God is all there is, felt as a bliss fizz. 11-July-2022

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Date: 7/11/2022 11:20:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker i like verses 4,5,6,and 7.Thes verses stand out to me. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2022 11:07:00 AM
Hello Unseeing Seeker, when a mirror is broken , does that mean bad luck for 7 years? Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2022 11:54:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, I see labels this way now. If we allow God to fill us with bliss we would be happy. I sense that the other verses have a deep meaning for me. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/11/2022 7:51:00 PM
:)
Date: 7/11/2022 8:03:00 AM
I love the form and stanzas are all powerful each on their own. The imagery is wonderful. Ann
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/11/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Ann. So happy these words resonate
Date: 7/11/2022 2:21:00 AM
Quite argumentative.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/11/2022 2:35:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Victor. You’ve written a poem? Let me check

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