Break of the Day-W

To me, yea, Iris is invisible, 
the scent of yours all pervading, 
Behold your face all-rich, 
When I close my eyes.
Wordsworth's daffodils to me, 
Membrane of the eyes, 
that gives light to me, 
Light that misleads the morn.
You are the genus iris, 
with sword-shaped leaves, 
Showy coloured flowers, 
displaying rainbow colours
Your eyes green and deep, 
Deeper than the depth, 
Stilled waters at even, 
those eyes, break of the day.
I see a heart full of love, 
with the gentleness of a dove, 
Feel in her eyes March, 
September in her heart.

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Seventh Place win in

Contest: My first (second) poem on the soup by P.D.

The Poem was posted on 16-6-2005, the day I joined the PS. The first being Sonnet 
written in Optimist Park have been entered in the earlier contest. This is second poem
posted on the same day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Adams Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 2:16 PM
nicely written and yes the title is the same, the poetry different...yours more peaceful then mine...I have written one on an iris as well and I do not think I posted it...was a couple months ago... thanks for pointing me to this piece! ..and I see it had a win, congrats for that :) lovely write!
Lewis Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 8:08 PM
nice and thank you for your kind words, do like your work
Fields Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 2:46 PM
This is the first time that you have simulated rhym. I thought that that was a never be,,,,, Remember to keep it short and keep the write-up, Up! This is just another way of saying thank you! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
Gorelick Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Dr Ram..I just love this one..it is swo beautiful..off to my favs...congrats. BG
Johnson Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:29 AM
Love the verse Dr Ram congratulations earned well. Don
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Oh, my gosh, Dr. Ram, have you been here since 2005?? that is incredible. I could have sworn you were kind of new when I first met you!! WEll, I think I remember this one. And it is really lovely. Congrats on your win with it.
Horne Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Dr Ram : )
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on another excellent victory with this poem from the beginning on PS.. great then..great now.. luv..enjoy..
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June 3, 2011 at 7:17 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
Poet Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:49 AM
What a beautiful poem is this one Dr.Mehta!This goes to my Favs.
Thomer Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 9:42 PM
wow, this is a very intriguing piece! beautiful images come to mind throughout this read. i have very much enjoyed reading this and am glad I didn't just pass it by. Thank you for this. Madison
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Oh wow....I almost missed this poem....I am so pleased I caught it among the featured poetry this week! this is a jewel,...a beauty to read. Love the references of the last two lines...just wonderful!! :) Carrie
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July 13, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 13, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Congrats on being featured on being featured. Rhonda Hero
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
Austin Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Congrats on this sensitive piece being selected. Love, Dave
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dr Ram. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:29 AM
lovely poem harry
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