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Sun rises in all its glory breaking through my window announcing with great fanfare the start of a new day A fresh new start full of potential choices to make and paths to take A day unlike all others we mustn't take for granted for days are numbered days are finite ~ let's make this one unforgettable AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Submitted on March 22, 2025 to contest YOUR CHOICE D sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH

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Date: 3/22/2025 7:56:00 PM
Nice! I can feeeel the potential. (Wish I didn't sleep through it these days. lol). Excelsior! ~ Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2025 9:49:00 PM
lol ~ well, I did not get out of bed till 10 thei morning so I get it
Date: 3/22/2025 9:24:00 AM
Dear Line, I adore the energy, optimism and gratitude expressed in your beautiful poem. Appreciation is contagious :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2025 9:25:00 AM
thank you so much, Susan ~

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