Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Break of Day

Sun rises in all its glory
breaking through my window
announcing with great fanfare
the start of a new day

A fresh new start
full of potential
choices to make
and paths to take

A day unlike all others
we mustn't take for granted
for days are numbered days are finite
~ let's make this one unforgettable


AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on March 22, 2025 to contest YOUR CHOICE D sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH

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Gershon Wolf March 22, 2025 at 7:56 PM Nice! I can feeeel the potential. (Wish I didn't sleep through it these days. lol). Excelsior! ~ Gershon Line Gauthier March 22, 2025 at 9:49 PM lol ~ well, I did not get out of bed till 10 thei morning so I get it

Susan Ashley March 22, 2025 at 9:24 AM Dear Line, I adore the energy, optimism and gratitude expressed in your beautiful poem. Appreciation is contagious :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Line Gauthier March 22, 2025 at 9:25 AM thank you so much, Susan ~