Break of Dawn

I stir sleepily stretching awake
an hour or so before dawn
tossing back the covers
I get to my feet and stretch

Ablutions now done
I call the dogs to heel
we all pile into my car
drive off in the predawn

Heading for a great valley
tucked sleepily in the woods
stream trickling through
where we see deer drinking

The sky is starting to lighten
shadows recede as moonlight
slowly fades and the sun
starts showing a sleepy face

Then bright rays shoot out
each one more dazzling
as the sun climbs up
coating all in sunshine

A wondrous glorious sight
as it bathes the valley
in warm tender hues
and its heat floods out

I enjoy the first light
as my dogs scurry around
setting up pheasants
with loud squawks

In the distance
two hares box each other
then they are off in
large circles then boxing

Fighting, sparring
for the right to mate
the red stag roars
soon they will disappear

As people come here
children will run about
shouting, dipping their
feet in the stream

Smoke lazily curling from
the barbecue's charcoal
little do they realize
what went on before

While in their slumber
tucked up in warm beds
they have missed the
secrets of the dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mohammed Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 5:09 AM
Enjoyed this one my dearest Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 6:13 AM
an old favourite of mine M.M love dawn glad you like it Shadow xox smile hugs
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Oh Shadow....loved this....so true.....
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:31 PM
hi Donna tnx you made my evening Shadow x smile
Devnath  Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Yes, who leaves bed early can enjoy the hues of dawn. A beautiful pictured adorned with the hues too. Lovely done. Loved always, bl
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:43 PM
hi BL best time of day ty for reading Shadow x smile
Ellison Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:24 AM
I'm one of those early risers... absolute best part of any day! Enjoyed this one, Shadow... hugz xoxoxox
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:45 PM
hi Jack wonderful time so much to be seen ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Good morning Shadow, I finished my Watch poem.
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:45 PM
on my way to read it ty for letting me know Shadow x smile hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Dawn is favorite time of day for me..Great adventure that you had in dawn's early light..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:43 PM
hi Sara in Africa I always was up a 4 am and out walking with my dog and many neighbourhood dogs joined us great fun Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Gasun Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 8:56 AM
A very delightful poem to read my dear friend Shadow. I love it and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this excellent poem of yours this evening. Thank you so much for sharing your precious gem and your superb talent. Thank you as well for your precious time to leave warm congratulatory comments on my work. Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:40 PM
hi Leonora glad you like it always have time for your work +) hope your weekend is a good one Shadow x smile
Odibi Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:54 AM
A wonderful experience that's so easy to miss.
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:36 PM
hi Kechi yes very easy but lovely if you make it Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 2:04 AM
this is so neat, and at the end, how the people will miss the secrets of dawn. What a lovely conclusion.
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:35 PM
hi Andrea ty it was a great early morning Shadow x smile
Horsman Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:31 PM
sounds and reads like the dales of yorkshire, but no matter, where ever this is beautiful poetry, and oh so visual...
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Hi Harry it is called Great Woods it is a valley in the Quantock Hills Somerset I wrote this back in march just tweaked it a bit. So happy you like it ty for reading Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 4:54 PM
This one made me feel relaxed until the bunnies started boxing *lol*. This was delightful Shadow!
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Hares lol they are a wonderful sight to behold in march "Ides of March" and a sign of spring they amused my dogs who would have loved to chase them but know better. Ty Richard appreciated Shadow x smile hugs
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