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Break of Dawn

I stir sleepily stretching awake an hour or so before dawn tossing back the covers I get to my feet and stretch Ablutions now done I call the dogs to heel we all pile into my car drive off in the predawn Heading for a great valley tucked sleepily in the woods stream trickling through where we see deer drinking The sky is starting to lighten shadows recede as moonlight slowly fades and the sun starts showing a sleepy face Then bright rays shoot out each one more dazzling as the sun climbs up coating all in sunshine A wondrous glorious sight as it bathes the valley in warm tender hues and its heat floods out I enjoy the first light as my dogs scurry around setting up pheasants with loud squawks In the distance two hares box each other then they are off in large circles then boxing Fighting, sparring for the right to mate the red stag roars soon they will disappear As people come here children will run about shouting, dipping their feet in the stream Smoke lazily curling from the barbecue's charcoal little do they realize what went on before While in their slumber tucked up in warm beds they have missed the secrets of the dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2013 5:09:00 AM
Enjoyed this one my dearest Shadow.
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:13:00 AM
an old favourite of mine M.M love dawn glad you like it Shadow xox smile hugs
Date: 10/19/2013 8:25:00 PM
Oh Shadow....loved this....so true.....
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Date: 10/19/2013 8:31:00 PM
hi Donna tnx you made my evening Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 12:39:00 PM
Yes, who leaves bed early can enjoy the hues of dawn. A beautiful pictured adorned with the hues too. Lovely done. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:43:00 PM
hi BL best time of day ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 10:24:00 AM
I'm one of those early risers... absolute best part of any day! Enjoyed this one, Shadow... hugz xoxoxox
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:45:00 PM
hi Jack wonderful time so much to be seen ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/19/2013 9:04:00 AM
Good morning Shadow, I finished my Watch poem.
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:45:00 PM
on my way to read it ty for letting me know Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/19/2013 9:01:00 AM
Dawn is favorite time of day for me..Great adventure that you had in dawn's early light..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:43:00 PM
hi Sara in Africa I always was up a 4 am and out walking with my dog and many neighbourhood dogs joined us great fun Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 8:56:00 AM
A very delightful poem to read my dear friend Shadow. I love it and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this excellent poem of yours this evening. Thank you so much for sharing your precious gem and your superb talent. Thank you as well for your precious time to leave warm congratulatory comments on my work. Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:40:00 PM
hi Leonora glad you like it always have time for your work +) hope your weekend is a good one Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 5:54:00 AM
A wonderful experience that's so easy to miss.
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:36:00 PM
hi Kechi yes very easy but lovely if you make it Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 2:04:00 AM
this is so neat, and at the end, how the people will miss the secrets of dawn. What a lovely conclusion.
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:35:00 PM
hi Andrea ty it was a great early morning Shadow x smile
Date: 10/18/2013 5:31:00 PM
sounds and reads like the dales of yorkshire, but no matter, where ever this is beautiful poetry, and oh so visual...
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:41:00 PM
Hi Harry it is called Great Woods it is a valley in the Quantock Hills Somerset I wrote this back in march just tweaked it a bit. So happy you like it ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/18/2013 4:54:00 PM
This one made me feel relaxed until the bunnies started boxing *lol*. This was delightful Shadow!
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:28:00 PM
Hares lol they are a wonderful sight to behold in march "Ides of March" and a sign of spring they amused my dogs who would have loved to chase them but know better. Ty Richard appreciated Shadow x smile hugs

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