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Listen to poem:
in the wee hours
while the world sleeps

with much anticipation
on tiptoe i rush out

to capture that perfect moment
when the sun arises

first morning rays cast
to greet an awaiting world



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on October 16, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/17/2021 5:23:00 PM
A wonderful few moments to treasure -- worthy every arthritic twitch, I say. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 10/17/2021 10:17:00 PM
The joy of growing old ~ beats the alternative, Gershon.
Date: 10/16/2021 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful and moving piece....a tribute to the wonder of a new day; we can never tire of writing about. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/16/2021 7:52:00 PM
So true, thank you, Paulette ~

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